The book is about
Johnny went sailing on a ship. At a moment, he saw a man dropping a black box into the sea. He thought it was a box full of drugs so he asked assistance to get the man throw of the ship. That man who dropped the box into the sea. he changed ship two days later, the is called 'The Sapho'. The man he was looking for is named Trevellyn. he knew that from the first time he saw the man on the ship, he recognized him. Day in day out, he was waiting for the moment that he could see him dewing drugs, but the day hasn’t come yet. but we stopped in a city because the night was falling, he saw Trevellyn going into a bar with two other peoples. After a half an hour, they left the bar and drove with a car to a storage. When they came out, Trevellyn was carrying a black box. He smuggled the box into the ship. After the night, we sailed off. he was thinking about how he should say this to someone. Three days later, there was a message for him saying that he should better leave the boat and fly home by plane. When I came home, he immediately rushed to the police station to tell my story. The police decided to go and arrest Trevellyn and ask him some questions. He could go with them. The police arrested him and asked him what he knew about the box that was dropped into the sea. First he said that he knew nothing. But after a period of time, he said that it was him dropping the box into the water. He also said that the leader of the gang asked him to do so. After this question, the police asked him who the leader was. He answered that it was Mr. Watts, the captain of the Sapho. The police arrested the whole gang and gave them seven years in prison.
Johnny went sailing on a ship. At a moment, he saw a man dropping a black box into the sea. He thought it was a box full of drugs so he asked assistance to get the man throw of the ship. That man who dropped the box into the sea. he changed ship two days later, the is called 'The Sapho'. The man he was looking for is named Trevellyn. he knew that from the first time he saw the man on the ship, he recognized him. Day in day out, he was waiting for the moment that he could see him dewing drugs, but the day hasn’t come yet. but we stopped in a city because the night was falling, he saw Trevellyn going into a bar with two other peoples. After a half an hour, they left the bar and drove with a car to a storage. When they came out, Trevellyn was carrying a black box. He smuggled the box into the ship. After the night, we sailed off. he was thinking about how he should say this to someone. Three days later, there was a message for him saying that he should better leave the boat and fly home by plane. When I came home, he immediately rushed to the police station to tell my story. The police decided to go and arrest Trevellyn and ask him some questions. He could go with them. The police arrested him and asked him what he knew about the box that was dropped into the sea. First he said that he knew nothing. But after a period of time, he said that it was him dropping the box into the water. He also said that the leader of the gang asked him to do so. After this question, the police asked him who the leader was. He answered that it was Mr. Watts, the captain of the Sapho. The police arrested the whole gang and gave them seven years in prison.
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